Audience feedback

After completing my magazine I decided to create a group chat where I asked my peers what they thought about my magazine. theses are the comments:

My complete music magazine

Working progress - contents page

For today's lesson i focused on the contents page. i have added an editor review that contains a signature to give the contents page a more professional look. Also, by adding an editors review it will give the reader an idea on what the whole magazine is about in the perspective of  someone who's already read the magazine. furthermore, i added social media icons and links to distribute my magazine onto different media platforms.

front cover

For my front cover i have added a scrap line just below the masthead. a scrap line is a phrase line that the magazine goes by.

CONTENTS PAGE

in this lesson i decided that I wanted to add a editor review. I done this because i wanted to avoid having any empty space and i didn't want to many picture. Also, i have added a few of my location pictures nut i think i may need to take some more because i want some of the photos have a clear visual of the theme of the magazine. For example, i may take a picture of someone playing an instrument which will clearly connote that the magazine is about music.

Quadruple page spread

for my quadruple page spread i have nearly finished my Q&A interview. whilst looking at examples of other magazine double page spreads, I decided to change the layout of my first DPS in that the artists name is more bolder to standout more. Also, although I have placed the introduction paragraph in a placed in a unconventional way but is still appopriate.

Working progress - contents and front cover